*Ashley (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} bleu_star) wrote in crayola123, |
You're a really great writer. The main thing that strikes me about this is that your style is much more mature than the stuff that is usually on this site. Not that the other stuff is bad, just that you develop your characters and scenery. It's not just dialogue and "a room" or something like that. I loved this. I can honestly say that it gave me warm fuzzies [b/c I am a huge dork like that, hehe]. :)
